hollow
Rank: Senior Member
Joined: 09 Jan 2004
Posts: 321
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 Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 8:55 am Post subject: Page 16: Lucky Makes A Funny |
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The Imperfect Picture puzzle is growing on me. Glutton for punishment that I am, though, I'm wishing it had more pieces...
Man oh man, what a picture.
Page 16 is a fine transitional, too. Poor Kicker. I hope that's not her head making that noise. DYN: the lighting changed; in 15, it's warm light on her left; now it's cold light on bottom, weird green light on top. I kinda liked the lighting on 15... also wish the top WHAM didn't obscure her face. Still, story's moving along, and that's always a good thing.
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