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PostPosted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 11:39 pm    Post subject: Sky B. Fox- New Flyer in Town Reply with quote

This is the base idea for my Fursona, Sky. This page for now may be incomplete but is a first draft of Sky and once I finalize it, any details I decide to add I'll BUMP the thread or post a new one altogether, especially when I can get permission or find other characters who let me itnerract with them. Mind you, it's rough because I've only been a forum member for barely a week and I chose a fox at the last minute, normally I'm equine but I felt a change was necessary.

NAME: Sky "Blue" Fox

GENDER: Male

AGE: 26

SPECIES: Fox

COLORS: Navy Blue top and back, sky blue frontside with black lower legs, forearms and tail tip.

NATIONALITY: American

OCUPATION: Champion glider master and gifted engineer

SEXUALITY: Heterosexual

HEIGHT: Average (No exact height referenace I've found in Bon Bon)

BUILD: Slim body with a light build, not very muscular but certainly not a weakling, which comes from his gliding experience and building skills that keep him fit. But he's certainly an atheltic runner for those takeoff runs.

CLOTHING: High rise leather boots, khaki and blue jeans typically with longlseeve shirts. A double over leather jacket with a white silk flying scarf, green cap on his head and gauntlet gloves, a pair of goggles that dangles on his neck when not on his eyes. His clothing is meant to be safety oriented in case of crashes with skids, landing or skimming bushes, wind whipping and when rockets explode they're fire protective.

BACKGROUND: Sky grew up in the western regions of America when it was expanding and from an early age he desired flight, others were trying it and he wanted to do it more than just be the first to achieve it. His family, however, was very negative to his habits being of a species that could not fly like the avions, especially when he'd build makeshift wings then jump off the roof of the house. Many times they would fold up like an umbrella or he'd crash hard and get injured. But with every failure he found something that worked and would make changes until he got it right. At 15 years old he successfully achieved a gliding flight and began to showoff for the town, depsite his parent's disgust.

His eyes for adaptation and tinkering became well known as his glider contraptions began to become more and more complex. People could see the gears of thoght in his head turning when he would seam to stare at an object, his eyes moving back and forth quickly for a few moments then he'll takeoff with tools and paper and he'll tackle the problem as if he's been doing it forever. Despite his brilliance in mechanical design and observation, his desire for flight was stronger than anything else and so he tookoff in gliding competitions all over the country, spending every penny he had on new contraptions and travel.

Sadly, distanced from his family and social life, more viewed as an outcast, Sky went to Europe to battle with greats like Otto Lilienthal and Octave Chanute and quickly began to overtake their fame with his unique contraptions and exceptional skill, many saying he was a natural flyer than a fox and was the wrong species. But one day, that hype got the best of him and during a contest with rather strong winds he decided to try and fly anyway and use the stronger winds to his advantage when a freak thunderstorm came by and blew him up high and higher than he'd ever been before, higher than anyone had ever been and battling the fierce storm he used every bit of his skill to keep his glider intact and when the storm settled enough he spied a town nestled in a mountain valley and decided to force land himself. With a hard landing that left him badly bruised and sore he crash landed in Bon Bon in someone's yard on the outskirts of town where he was found unconscious (I know who's yard but waiting on permission from that person).

PERSONALITY: Sky is a very shy young fox, VERY shy. Sadly being intelligent made him an outcast in home and school and his social life has been rather small. He never had a very good relationship and was even very badly hurt in a relationship a while ago which left him emotionally and physically scarred. So he drowned his sorrows in his desire and joy of achieving flight. His ultimate desire is to achieve powered flight and his models he builds and flies for the public become regular spectacles.

Despite his lack of experience he is actually a very true gentleman when he's around ladies. His gentle smile and soft nature are rare in that he will open doors for any lady if he is nearby, even rushing to open it for them, stand whenever they leave or approach a table and the like, but it does get him in trouble sometimes. In a town where the simplest innocent remark can have intimate consequences, Sky tends to get shy or scared and bow out. Even the girls are sometimes shocked that his natural gentleman gestures have no inuendos behind them except the hope of a smile and a "thank you". And this it puts him out of his league in Bon Bon where he definately desires the companionship he's heard about and yet his past makes him afraid of it, fearful of being tragically hurt again.

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I'll hold off here at this point until I get some input from people. His Residence, Hobbies and true Bon Bon history will be finished when I can get permission from certain members to use their personas as part of his history. Plus some of these details may have to be changed depending on the Bon Bon story as I already had to leave out teh whole powered flight portion.

But how is this so far?
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 1:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think it looks good. You've covered all the basics really well, and you've done a good job describing him.

I like your choice of occupation. I think you've chosen one that's unique, yet at the same time can work well in Bon Bon.


I'm interested in seeing how you'll develop your fursona further. Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you. Smile I'm excited myself, I've never created a character on the fly like that but when I do, it just rolls off my tongue.

Since he crashes in Constance's lawn you might have to help me out a little here and there since they become good friends? One thing she may like is that he can also play guitar and a little piano (though I don't myself), which could help her on occassion with rehearsals. And when she performs in Bon Bon he never misses her performance and always sends a bouqet to her dressing room, always an admirer.

For those interested, I've considered possible interests as Constance Mayflower herself, but my first thoughts were Jessice Belle and Periwinkle from the castle. Constance because she was kind despite he crashed on her property and enjoys her company when he's not gliding or tinkering with his contraptions for the public.

Jessica because he sees her constantly for healing and massuse treatments after his initial crash and subsequent calamity antics always require healings and massages.

Perwininkle... I don't know why, I just think she's hot! HUBBA HUBBA!!! Very Happy But I also figured since he spends all his money on his contraptions he doesn't frequent the castle except for the restauraunt and casino.

He's gifted in the roulette game thanks to his engineering eyes, he could count cards but it'd be obvious and get him the boot thanks to his counting mind, but when he wins at the table with money for his contraptions, all the girls flock to him expecting him to take one of them to a room and instead he always slinks out the door very nervously. Mind you, that's not definitive, I will wait for permission from the repsected members.

Opinions, anyone?
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 2:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Jessica Belle a a lesbian, so he won't have much luck with her.

As for Periwinkle, he may not be able to afford visiting her, but if Constance finds out about his interest in the skunk, she may just offer to pay for her services for an entire night, as a gift and a means for him to get some experience.

Of course, Constance may just decide to find him a suitable girlfriend instead, offering him advice on all kinds of things.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 8:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Boy, it's sounding like Sky's gonna have no problems with keeping his snake in his pants in Bon Bon then. Jessica's out and Periwinkle's won't get his money. Se la vie`.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

BlueHawk82 wrote:

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Se la vie


((Um... isn't it "Cie la vie"?

Anyhows, instead of having him scripted to be an "outcast", why not just make him more eccentric or something? "Outcast", to me, has a negative connotation associated with it... while "eccentric" just means you're one of those characters who works on a different wave-length than everyone else. Tinkers, mechanics, and inventors usually are very odd, strange, and unfamiliar characters... all of which fit with the idea of being eccentric. Outcast, again to me, seems more... like a lone-wolf, or someone who is narcissistic, or intolerant of the whole Victorian Era.

Though... being from the Sun Belt, eccentric, to Caroline, would mean you're crazy, but weathly... um... yeah, that was my lame attempt at humor.))
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice avatar.

Hope that you will join us soon in a rp. Wink
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 10:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'd like to join some RPs soon. Smile Just have to wait until I finish his character page slightly and I'm thinking I'd like to write his arrival in Bon Bon possibly in a three-part episode page, how he developed his timid personality and what happened when he crashed in Constance's yard.

Heck, I'd even like to do a couple stories about his flying antics at some point, even do a fan comic. I've done my own comics and artworks before, today I'm even trying to work on his bust shot to get a picture idea.

UPDATE: It is decided Sky crashes into Constance Mayflower's yard.

The reason Sky was an outcast outside of Bon Bon, I see him as becoming a regular spectacle and attraction when he comes to town. The reason he IS a lone wolf was two years before arriving in Bon Bon, just before he left America was because the one girl he was in love with had used him and then just one day dropped him hard and when he tried to find otut why her new love interest beat him up and stabbed him in ther right chest with a bowie knife. Whenever he socializes with the girls, even if they're not interested in a monetary exchange experience but just to know him, the scar he has begins to hurt and he'll gracefully take his leave but then you'd find him in a corner somewhere quiet with his hand over his chest. Sadly it's a fear he has because though he wishes to be close to someone the scars of the past still weigh heavily of that day.

(This is similar to a personal experience, but I'll leave that for the personal section.)

Surprisingly everyone sees he's perfectly comfortable with Constance on any level. Fortunately when he was injured on her property her kind and generous nature towards him made a special place in his heart for her, and even deep inside he feels a desire for her. That he can be friends with her and share time with somone who doesn't look down on him or judge him harshly gives him a renewed hope. Even when she takes someone else he doesn't mind one bit and is always there for her, whether at the theater watching her perform or just spending time.

QUESTION: So who else besides Periwinkle and Jessica would make good interests???
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 12:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

BlueHawk82 wrote:

QUESTION: So who else besides Periwinkle and Jessica would make good interests???

I think there are plenty of possible candidates. It really depends on a lot of things, and I'm not really sure of what your fursona finds attractive in females.

Any thoughts on this yourself? Like whether Sky is looking for a relationship with one of the girls working at the Delight Castle? Or if you've thought about what kinds of women he tends to find himself attracted to?

Personally, my first thought for a possible candidate would be Sidney Brown, the sweet kangaroo girl working at the Outback Omnibus. She has a bit of that girl next door look, which in my opinion makes her a good candidate for something more than a casual encounter.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 12:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good point, Symphony, I haven't given that much thought. Remind me to put a PREFERANCES section later once I work it out some more, I'll try and type that up tonight. But you already know why Constance is up there, no need to repeat that anymore. But it was AFTER I created his profile that I read your character's and thought to myself "Constance would be perfect, she's what he needs to snap out of his pain".
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Hey I know I shouldn't be posting a new post but out of curiosity, anyone here yet done a fursona with twin tails??? If not I'd like to incorporate that in Sky.

UPDATE: I've tried and type of Sky's Residence, Hobbies and Preferences of girls, though long winded and perhaps not what you'd think, how's this?

RESIDENCE: Sky resides in a small workshop he found in the outer district away from the central streets where the more platonic business of Bon Bon resides with a little loft above it that he lives in. Inside he makes his gliders and tinkers with inventions and ideas. When he's not building a new glider or soaring in the mountains, he makes novelty toys for the more wealthy clients and souvenirs that include unique and one of a kind kites for visitor's children and those seeking a calm experience, to small powered models he builds for select wealthy members that are each unique and he'll publically display on occasion, as well as custom engineering as a draftsman and light mechanical work. His shop is perfect because he can sit on the roof and relax starring at the sky when it's not right to soar, quiet and solitude when he wants to think or sleep inside, his shop satisfies his curiosities when he wants to work on his inventions and clients. Because he's near the hiking trails he can pack-up his equipment and climb up to his favorite soaring spots without anyone noticing and it's still just a short few minutes downtown to the local pub for a relaxing drink, meal or to his friend Constance Mayflower's house.

HOBBIES: Sky loves nothing more than soaring up in the mountains. The Bon Bon mountains and valley with its ideal weather offer the greatest winds and thermals for him to soar and perform death defying feats with. He likes to write his experiments and findings in a journal every night before he goes to sleep, constantly rereading his pervious entries to see how he's progressing towards his ultimate goal of powered flight.

But one thing he loves more than anything is a nice night out at the local pub downtown with a pint of stout or a shot of whiskey where he enjoys telling stories of his latest escapades, which many people want to know about after seeing him brushing with death. After arriving and finding the nice nature of the pub he rediscovered his guitar and plays it on occasion, either singing old folksongs his father and family used to sing or makes up his own that come from his heart. Every Friday night a group of gentlemen bring their instruments and play together, which soon attracts a crowd every time the twin tail fox and company serenade the night with lighthearted music, he'll even dance Irish jigs of his heritage when his fellow musicians break out into fun step reels and jigs the night away after the whiskey has set in.

Yet despite his wild and daredevil-ish side he still likes the more refined pleasures such as opera music and artworks of sculptures and paintings and casual relaxing days with his acquaintances of Bon Bon. Nice walks and elegant intellectual conversations over a bottle of wine or tea with company really take his mind away from the Sky and bring him down to earth for a short time now and then.

PREFERANCES: Preferences are something Sky tends to keep to himself, no one really knows who he likes. Surprisingly, Sky is the only person who's come to Bon Bon completely by accident and without intent, so his preferences weren't apart of his choice to stay. No one has even seen him with a girl during his entire stay and he doesn't even take any girls back to his place, or go to any girls' rooms at the delight castle. Being a virgin, and a scarred one at that, it makes it difficult for him to attach to anyone. Though he doesn't deny being physically attracted to many girls, Bon Bon is full of beauties he's only dreamed of, he finds it hard to attach to anyone. The brash and upfront girls of Bon Bon often make him uncomfortable due to his shy nature, particularly the street girls who always try to coax him when he passes by.

Ultimately he would like to one day settle down when he gets a little older and hangs up his wings but for now he simply wishes for companionship and being comfortable with someone, long term or short term makes no difference to him, with no experience at either he doesn't care which at the moment is better. The possibility of coming down too hard one day always looms in his head and thus he doesn't want to leave a broken heart behind if he leaves the world. He'd never admit it but he wishes for his first experience to be with someone that he cares for, not someone to settle down with per say, but certainly someone who would have a special place in his heart to get him over the hill then afterwards he'll go and explore and see what he's been missing. It's difficult enough for him to even talk to a girl that she has to understand how fragile he really is inside and be gentle with him, not quite so aggressive.

As far as species goes, Sky's not picky at all, though perhaps isn't quite so interested in marsupials as others, not to say he wouldn't be but not his first choice. He likes those of similar phylum, such as other foxes, skunks and canines are the first to catch his eyes and get them to wander. Equines are a special interest he feels due to their majestic and proud nature with elegant bodies like fine artworks in themselves, he knew a couple palomino girls in America but was too shy to do anything. Felines are somewhat of a turnoff as Jenny back In America was the girl who caused him to get stabbed, so being approached by one gets him very nervous when by himself. His favorite attributes are gentle eyes and a nice smile, the kind he can look into and know her rather than wonder what could she be thinking of doing. The rest of her is only skin deep, though he won't complain.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 8:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks good to me. Very Happy
You do seem to focus more on the personality and some of the deeper reasons behind getting involved with a female, than most of the people I've seen here. It's not a bad thing, though. Just an interesting and different perspective.

A possible possible candidate could be Lily, but why not just stay focused on Periwinkle? Sky would just have to save some money so he can afford spending some time with her. Though, to be honest, the way I read your fursona's preferences, it doesn't look to me like he'd want his first time to be with a girl he'd have to pay. I might have to look through the comic again to see if there's someone suitable based on Sky's preferences.

About the twin tails, I don't think anyone has a fursona like that, though I believe that Tearlach has a side-character with two tails. You could ask Vanessa how she feels about twin tails. I did that when I wanted Constance to have feet instead of hooves.
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Yeah, because Sky's not someone who came to town thinking of his "winkle" in mind and you're right, he won't pay for a first time but after that first one he'll blend into the rest of the heartbreakers they call Bon Bon Men. He came in by accident, not by choice and found it desireable to stay. And with a heart burdened by past scars it's difficult that he can talk to a girl, looks are the least of his worries. If you think about it, it's also something that though subtle stands out rather well in such a place.

Well, Lilly isn't too bad, she's nice looking but she was REALLY insistent on getting Red. Remember, Sky would run with BOTH tails between his legs if someone just jumped on him like so, so have I. My original thought was his accidents, shows and such would make him frequent certain girls outside the castle more so than inside, giving him casual meetins with some which is why he'd have interests in such girls as Jessica, due to his need for healing and massuse treatments or let's say even Margarette the nut vendor because he likes to get trail mix from her before he hikes up to the mountains for a soaring trip. Periwinkle came into play because I figured when he wins at the roulette table or plays blackjack for his contraption money, she was the first to approach him thinking he'd spend it on a pleasureable experience and tries to entice him the majority of his trips.

Why he has a special place for Constance and always admiring. Just before he passed out after he crashed he thought a beautiful angel was singing him to heaven only to find out when he wakes up he's not dead and instead when he comes to he finds what he thought was an angel was a gorgeous lady with a voice like an angel and doesn't even bare him a grudge despite a glider is sticking through her fence? Hell, I'd fall in love with someone kind hearted like that. He's had similar accidents and every time they've have bashed him down, thrown fits over the damage or called him a lunatic for flying.

So yeah, Sky is even sounding an interesting character to me, too, and as you ask me questions and suggest ideas I'm developing him better all the time. I'm liking this.

I know, what if I go through the comic, list someone I think then you tell me why or why not?
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

nice more foxes.... and your high i wuold think would be 6'1'' Average male..... at least thats what i think
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Do you think there's too many foxes already?
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

BlueHawk82 wrote:

Why he has a special place for Constance and always admiring. Just before he passed out after he crashed he thought a beautiful angel was singing him to heaven only to find out when he wakes up he's not dead and instead when he comes to he finds what he thought was an angel was a gorgeous lady with a voice like an angel and doesn't even bare him a grudge despite a glider is sticking through her fence? Hell, I'd fall in love with someone kind hearted like that. He's had similar accidents and every time they've have bashed him down, thrown fits over the damage or called him a lunatic for flying.

Thank you for the nice comment on my fursona. You seem to have a very detailed and personalized description of your fursona's arrival in Bon Bon and how he reacts to the place. I find it very interesting to read.

BlueHawk82 wrote:

So yeah, Sky is even sounding an interesting character to me, too, and as you ask me questions and suggest ideas I'm developing him better all the time. I'm liking this.

Well, he is an interesting character, I think, and I enjoy talking about fursonas, especially as they are being developed. I'm glad that you also enjoy it and that it might inspire you to come up with more ideas and stories.

BlueHawk82 wrote:

I know, what if I go through the comic, list someone I think then you tell me why or why not?

Hehe, sure you can do that. The decision will be all up to you, of course, but I won't mind adding my thoughts and opinions. I'm interested in seeing who your final choice will be. Smile

BlueHawk82 wrote:
Do you think there's too many foxes already?

There are only two male foxes in the Four Aces suite. There's one more on the waiting list, I believe, but compared to how popular they usually are in furry communities, I guess we don't really have that many here.
So no, I don't think we have too many foxes yet, and I think you should keep your chosen species.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 6:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

UPDATE: Hey guys, short update today. A net friend of mine on another site gave me a rough sketch of Sky and I'm working on doing a bust shot of him from that now so I'll be out for a little bit, posting it here shortly, but I also have to finish a pinup art commission with getting my art studio back in order after a long weekend.

QUESTION: The one question I want to pose today is would anyone be interested in me writing out Sky's story of what led him to arrive in Bon Bon? And if it's good would anyone like me to make it into a comic strip for possibly the fan comic section?

Oh yeah, Symphony, I read Constance's diary cover to cover the other day, YOU'RE GOOD!!! I wish there was more, you did it very well.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

if you can do that i think you might as well...i know i wouldnt mind seeing more comics.. x3
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, one person wants to see the story, that's good. Smile For now I'll work out part 1 of his introduction story and post it later, at least see how well it's received. Comics, I'm going to leave until I get an almost unanimous request due to the intense labor it requires.

UPDATE: But here's something new, I just finished a rough draft of my initial conception of him, bust only for now and no exotic apparel. But I do think it does pull off the proper concept of age and soft nature with a nice hairstyle and body tone layout. Opinions so far?


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow thats a good i feel really bad at drawing now XD then again i still got a long way to go...
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 1:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice picture. Smile
I think he really looks as he's supposed to, based on the profile you've written.


About his story, I'm sure that many would love to read such a comic, but due to the amount of work required for it, it makes perfect sense to wait for a bit, and just focus on getting his story written. I'm sure that both versions will be a interest to people here.


and thanks for the nice comment about my diary story. It's a way for me to have my own little project to work on. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 1:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you look sexy, why don't you and henk will take a bar tour and score some company.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

henkcobra wrote:
you look sexy, why don't you and henk will take a bar tour and score some company.


That sounds like fun, if you'll allow me to use your fursona I'd welcome it. Just have to discuss a few things so I have a good base about what Henk's like, also remember he's extremely shy and straight so no bi stuff and he might not receive to well to the girls, but that's the essence of the story.

To be quite honest, I'm thinking this'd be an interesting story to see Bon Bon from a guy's point of view regarding the girls, since Bon Bon men are known to be heartbreakers but what if the girls were just as bad, too? Just a thought, but this is what I'm seeing as I make notes.

Symphony wrote:
Nice picture. Smile
I think he really looks as he's supposed to, based on the profile you've written.


Thank you. Smile Glad you approve, since this little guy lands in your backyard.

Symphony wrote:
About his story, I'm sure that many would love to read such a comic, but due to the amount of work required for it, it makes perfect sense to wait for a bit, and just focus on getting his story written. I'm sure that both versions will be a interest to people here.


Yes, it will be. I was sketching out his story the other night, got the point where he woke up and was heading for the competition just before his wizard of Oz entrance to Bon Bon, and I'll need to discuss some of your character's details before I get to part 3 or release past his crash. Just like Henk up there, I'll need to know some details about the characters so I write them correctly, perhaps even email the details so I don't give away any spoilers on here. Is that alright?

Also, for now I've thought about trying some pictures of them together in some friendship scenes, even rough his crash moment, would you have any objections?


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 2:59 pm    Post subject: UPDATE: Color Check Reply with quote

Hey guys, color testing Sky. How's this look for him? I need to make a shade and highlight layer still but this is a rough. And yes, his ears too.

OH YEAH!!! I forgot to mention, you're not going to believe this but it turns out Chessy and I are on the same game of another site, been neighbors for a bit. I realized it when I saw her avatar here used there, too. And wouldn't you know it, Chessy is one of the characters I've considered using at some point and she's going to help me a little. Very Happy This is getting better all the time!


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 3:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looking great.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 12:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uh... this is going to sound rather ironic but those that have read know that Sky arrives in Bon Bon while crashing his glider through Constance's back yard...

And I found out today my father had set our airplane down on the freeway last night. I don't know whether I should be glad or happy that he's alright but is this irony or something???
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 12:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i think its a sign >.> i get sick and have massive headaches when some one i love gets hurt and i dont find out when it happens//...
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 2:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This avatar looks great, and you chosen a flying fox! There isn't even nothing wrong with the era (the first manned, non-powered and controlled flight of an heavier-than-air flying machine took place right in the 19th century). I was looking for the same idea cause I really wanna share my passion of flight, but I should fall back on something else.

Just a question: why flying? Are you involved in flying somehow?

Congrats for the idea Wink
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 4:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sure am niki90! Lock stock and licensed, even designed and am building my own aircraft in the real world. But it's an extremely slow going process.

I just involve a degree of flying in everything I do, unless it's something where there's nothing to do with flying then I leave it out. Not to mention, if you've ever seen Those Magnificent Men in their Flying Machines or the old theater reals of people trying this stuff, it's quite hilarious stuff. Not even Sky would be immune from such things.

The one thing that is especially unusual besides the blue color fur is he has TWIN tails. The reason I chose that is my favorite aircraft was the US Navy's F-14 Tomcat, it was the first fighter with two tails and the patch the pilots wore was a cat with two tails to symbolize that so it's kind of my one little niche about it. Symetry to me is something unique and a definate purpose.

I even used his flying habits and arrival in Bon Bon as a backstory for the new map I've proposed. you can find that in the Discussions forum if you want to see it.
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